With your own AI (optional)
The story layer: critique you can check.
Connect Claude, ChatGPT, Gemini or a model on your own computer, and First Mate can read for story, not just sentences. Before anything is sent, it shows you exactly what will go (“chapter 7, 4,210 words, your Source of Truth and your decisions”) and waits for you to press Send.
Proofread with my AI
Small fixes only. First Mate asks three times (five in Careful mode) and only shows the fixes most answers agree on, with the agreement on the card: 3 of 3 agree. It never rewrites your sentences, and it never touches dialogue beyond a typo.
Chapter and manuscript critique
Opening hook, scene purpose, tension, point of view, character, dialogue, pacing, setting and ending. For the whole book, a beat map, character arcs, themes and open threads. Notes land in the margin, and you can reply, mark one done, or mark it intentional. Each run is saved as a round, so you can compare drafts.
Grounded in your pages
Every finding must quote your text and name its chapter, or it’s thrown out. Names are checked against your Source of Truth, chapter numbers come from the app (not the AI), and one reading of the story feeds every report, so they can’t contradict each other. Strengths and problems are separate lists, so it can’t flatter you.
Continuity
Facts can change over time (“Ruth is 34” until her birthday in chapter 20). On your device, First Mate flags passages that contradict what’s true at that point. With AI it also checks the timeline, who knows what, where things are, point of view and tense, and keeps a ledger of setups that never pay off.
Beta readers, on demand
Reads 50 books a year in your genre. Wants the promise of the cover kept.
Looks for plot holes and things that don’t add up. Always in a full read, so feedback is never all praise.
Structure, pacing and clarity.
Confusion, names, and who’s who.
Who they are, what they care about, and how blunt: gentle, honest or brutal.
Readers react in the margin at the moment it happens (“Lost track of who’s speaking here”, “Didn’t see that coming”, “Put the book down here”), then say whether they’d keep reading. A reader map shows where each one was hooked, confused or bored.


